Story
THE MONGERING — PAGE 18: SMALL VICTORIES. A noir comic page in black-and-white with teal and amber accents, rainy noir cinematic look. Use the uploaded character reference for Douglas — a man with short dark hair and a beard, wearing a dark suit. 4 panels.
Panel 1: Morning. The bus stop. The bus pulls up — and Marcus is ON it, in a clean shirt, waving through the window. First day. Marcus (through glass): "Thursday!"
Panel 2: Douglas, waving back — a real smile, the first easy one in the issue.
Panel 3: Douglas's phone. A text from Lena: a photo of a small, imperfect storefront — "MABEL'S" going up in fresh paint. Lena (text): "Signed the lease. Small space. It's mine."
Panel 4: Douglas typing back, standing in the rain, steady. Douglas (text): "Proud of you." Caption: "The constants hold. Two of them, anyway."
Render all speech, text-message and caption text exactly as written, with perfect spelling.
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