Story
THE MONGERING — PAGE 11: WHAT IT COST THEM. A noir comic page in black-and-white with teal and amber accents, rainy noir cinematic look. Use the uploaded character reference for Douglas — a man with short dark hair and a beard, wearing a dark suit. 4 panels.
Panel 1: Douglas at his desk, late at night. The worn photo of his parents. He touches the frame. Caption: "They fought something they couldn't name."
Panel 2: Fragmented memory — his mother at a kitchen table, bills spread out before her, looking down at them with tired, worried eyes. A microwave clock in the background reads 4:04 — inconspicuous background set dressing. Caption: "It cost them everything they were building."
Panel 3: Fragmented memory — his father at a window, staring at nothing, young Douglas (12) in the doorway. Father (speech balloon): "We almost had it, son. We were *this* close."
Panel 4: Present. Douglas takes the key off its hook, holds it tight, breathes. Grounds himself. Caption: "He was twelve. He remembers the sound of a future leaving a house."
Render all speech and caption text exactly as written, with perfect spelling.
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