Story
THE MONGERING — PAGE 16: HOLDING THE LINE. A noir comic page in black-and-white with teal and amber accents, rainy noir cinematic look. Use the uploaded character reference for Douglas — a man with short dark hair and a beard, wearing a dark suit. 4 panels.
Panel 1: Douglas in his doorway at night, the key in his hand, looking out at the rain. Caption: "What he owns. What he's built. What he's grateful for."
Panel 2: Close on his face — decided. Douglas thinking (thought bubble): "One person. One decision. That's where it gets in."
Panel 3: Him stepping out into the rain, shoulders square. Douglas thinking (thought bubble): "So that's where I'll be."
Panel 4: Night. A notebook on his desk. His hand writing two names: MARCUS. LENA. Caption: "The ledger begins. Not of what was taken — of who was pulled back."
Render all speech, thought and caption text exactly as written, with perfect spelling.
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