Story
THE MONGERING — PAGE 8: TWO CONVERSATIONS. A noir comic page in black-and-white with teal and amber accents, rainy noir cinematic look. Use the uploaded character reference for Douglas — a man with short dark hair and a beard. 4 panels.
Panel 1: Memory flash — a warm kitchen, years ago, slightly golden. Douglas as a young boy. His father, tired but certain, hand on his shoulder. Father (speech balloon): "Listen to what they mean, son. Not what they say."
Panel 2: Back in the coffee shop. The stranger's line rendered twice: her normal speech balloon, and beneath it a dark translucent echo-balloon with the same words, heavier, wrong. Echo-balloon text: "Some people have all the luck."
Panel 3: Close on Douglas's eyes. He gets it — not the meaning, just the fact of it. Douglas thinking (thought bubble): "Everyone else heard small talk."
Panel 4: Him looking toward the door the strangers left through. Empty. Douglas thinking (thought bubble): "I heard two conversations."
Render all speech and thought text exactly as written, with perfect spelling.
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