Story
THE MONGERING — PAGE 12: THE RUMOR. A noir comic page in black-and-white with teal and amber accents, rainy noir cinematic look. Use the uploaded character reference for Douglas — a man with short dark hair and a beard, wearing a dark suit. 4 panels.
Panel 1: Lena outside the lost storefront, peering through glass at the chain's construction. A neighbor beside her, chatty, certain. Neighbor (speech balloon): "I heard about the inspection thing. It's not my fault, I'm just saying what I heard."
Panel 2: Douglas across the street, looking at a property listing on his phone — then looking up, caught by the words. A passerby's cigarette smoke curling between them — subtle, deniable.
Panel 3: Douglas crossing to them, easy, curious — not confrontational. Douglas (speech balloon): "Inspection thing? Who told you that, exactly?"
Panel 4: The neighbor blinking. The certainty wobbling. Neighbor (speech balloon): "...I don't... someone at the— you know, people were saying—" Caption: "No source. Just whispers. Douglas had seen this shape before. Yesterday. At a bus stop."
Render all speech and caption text exactly as written, with perfect spelling.
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